Persuasion in Ancient Greece
Andrew Scholtz, Instructor
Study Guides. . .
Aristophanes Clouds
Heads-Up: Profanity; Offensive, Yet Serious Material
This for some of you will be your first exposure to what is termed "Attic Old Comedy," i.e., the kind of free-wheeling, sexually and scatologically rich comedy that Athenians enjoyed from 485 through about 380 BCE. You've actually already seen a little of that: isolated quotations pertaining to Pericles and his leadership, and often attacking him in outrageous style.
Now, Old Comedy didn't always feature political content, but it often did, and Aristophanes was the master. Expect a seemingly loose plot (though in this case, you'll find it all hangs together thematically quite well); lots of what look like the words to songs, as in a musical comedy (actually, Old Comedies WERE musical comedies — those really were songs); lots of "buh-DUM-bum" jokes, often meant to comment on personalities presumably well known to the audience, Socrates especially.
Above all, please don't be surprised (you're welcome to be shocked) by the abundant quantities of sexual, scatological (i.e., bathroom), and generally offensive humor, including that of a clearly biased and intolerant character.
Please understand that the translator, in his use of language, isn't making it all up. Rather, he does little more than try to capture in English what most certainly was originally meant to come across as offensive, abusive, etc. Needless to say, standards of decency and respectfulness have changed radically — though maybe not so much if you watch a lot of cable TV comedy. . . .
Anyway, what might not be so immediately obvious is that Aristophanic comedy cannot simply be dismissed as puerile and egregiously incorrect politically. It is all that, of course, yet needs as well to be approached as satire addressing important themes the way satire typically does: through jokes, outlandish imagery, and exaggeration.
Your job will, then, not be to try to read Aristophanes sympathetically as much as give him the benefit of the doubt intellectually, as the philosopher Plato most certainly did — to ask, in other words, WHAT KIND OF SOCIAL-POLITICAL COMMENTARY UNDERLIES ALL THAT HORSING AROUND.
In-class Discussion
Many of you will have noticed I've been lecturing a lot of late. Expect from this point forward that most of the facts and theory I needed to cover has been covered, that class will, henceforth, largely revolve around student-centered discussion.
Put differently, I've mostly completed my tasks; it'll be your turn now — thanks!!
Readings Journal Entries
Pheidippides' Choice of Education Revisited: "Better" Argument v. "Worse" Argument
Prepare one argument pro-"Better Argument, one argument pro-"Worse Argument." In other words, be prepared to argue either side of the question of whether Pheidippides should study with one or the other. Try to pitch your case to Pheidippides as best you can. Approach this basically as an experiment to see what sorts of arguments best convince. We'll choose a panel of judges to represent Pheidippides' interests. We'll not, however, stipulate winning criteria in advance.
- In class I will form you into three groups
- Pro BETTER ARGUMENT
- Pro WORSE ARGUMENT
- Judges
- Points awarded for. . .
- Ringing phrases appealing to shared values (review Gorgias Epitaphios [Funeral Oration])
- Spin well spun (Protagoras, sophists generally)
- If you can convincingly spin the "radish" argument (see below) either pro or con, then you'll win the special door prize
- Appropriate leveraging of ideas dealt with by Weber, Michels, Finley
- Any suitably convincing utilization of concepts operative in our class
- Points subtracted for
- Offensive language, sentiments, etc. (again, standards have changed)
- Mere echoing of the play
- Poor prep, incomplete reading, etc.
- In short, read and meditate on the whole play, not just the agon!
Study Guide Proper
Strepsiades ("Twister") is an Athenian old man described by the critic Dover as living " 'far off in the country.' He is ignorant, stupid, and boorish, a son of the soil and smelling of the soil - but one of its richer sons." His son has the somewhat aristocratic-sounding, yet oxymoronic, name of "Pheidippides," "thrifty with the horses." But Pheidippides is anything but: a horse-racing enthusiast, he's racked up huge debts on his father's account. So Strepsiades wants to send him to Socrates' "Thinkery" (Phrontisterion) to learn the skills necessary for Strepsiades to weasel his way out of debt.
As to the structure of the play, you'll find that if follows an oft-repeated formula in ancient comedy generally:
- Problem, here, Strepsiades' debts.
- Solution, here, sophistic training so that Strepsiades (or his proxy) can argue away that debt in court (or better and more fun, in a bit of on-stage fisticuffs to stand in for courtroom fights that don't seem to occur).
- Celebration, the Dionysian part, were the protagonists party hearty.
You'll find, though, that that "formula" gets played with in this play by way of a kind of second plot, same "formula," but with the variables filled in different:
- Problem, here, SOPHISTIC TRAINING.
- Solution, here, A SATIRIC INTERROGATION OF SOPHISTIC and sociopolitical circumstances leading to its prominence in late 400s Athens.
- Celebration, here, . . . what, if anything????
Pay special attention to the changing role of the CHORUS OF CLOUDS, what they represent at various points in the play. Pay SPECIAL attention to the ending, and what kind of "celebration" that represents — who, in the end, is the joke really on??
The New Intellectualism
Sophists (see sophistic study guide)
Presocratics
In Clouds, Aristophanes attacks all intellectuals, including philosophers we now call the Presocratics, whose interests lay in physics (i.e., what we'd call science), metaphysics (the study of the foundations of existence, knowledge, etc.), and ethics. In the play you see the denizens of Socrates' "Thinkery" studying astronomy, geology, and such — that probably has more to do with these Presocratics than with the sophists.
Socrates
An Athenian philosopher, lived 470?-399 BCE. He never wrote anything; our knowledge of him and his thought comes from the writings of others. In his youth he showed an interest in physics. Later, his interests seem to have narrowed almost exclusively to ethics and ethical definitions. The degree to which doctrines attributed to him by Plato really were his (Socrates') remains unclear. (E.g., Platonic metaphysics - theory of forms and such - may be more Platonic than Socratic.)
NOTE: Socrates would not have thought of himself as a sophist (teacher for hire), nor in his mature years did he think of himself as interested in the sorts of subjects (particularly natural science) that preoccupied a lot of the thinkers of the time. This is, then, a very unfair portrait of Socrates, who seems to have resented what Aristophanes' comedy did to his reputation (if Plato is to be believed). But that didn't stop Socrates from being the butt of jokes treating him as a sophist.
In 399, Socrates was put to death by the Athenian people on a charge of impiety.
General Questions
- How does Aristophanes characterize the new intellectualism?
- Why does he chose Socrates as his target?
- How does the playwright try to connect with his audience?
- How well does he do?
- What (if anything) can the play tell us about sophistic and/or popular attitudes toward same? What do we learn?
Agon ("contest") pp. 203-215
Between "Better Argument" and "Worse Argument," personifications of two sides to the issue of the utility-morality of sophistic.
The Greek says kreitton logos ("better/stronger argument") and hetton logos ("weaker/inferior argument"). This evidently was inspired by the phrase associated with Protagoras: "to make the weaker argument (hetton logos) stronger (kreitton)" (fr. 6 D-K; click here).
Questions:
- How does the playwright characterize the two logoi ("arguments")?
- What seems to be his rhetorical aim?
- How does Aristophanes seem to try to connect with his audience?
- How is humor used here?
- How does the imagery work?
- How well does Aristophanes do?
- What do you make of the "radish" argument?
- Worse Argument wants to convince Pheidippides that (a) by studying with him he can beat a charge of adultery (and thus commit adultery ad libitum), and (b) that the painful humiliations sometimes suffered by adulterers, including being reamed up the rear with a radish, aren't so bad after all. Note that, quite apart from the physical harm thus inflicted, for a male adulterer to undergo a radish-reaming would be tantamount to being "buggered" (being used sexually like a woman), an intolerable form of treatment for any citizen male.
- Is there a serious commentary here? (Yes, probably, but what is it?)